Touch me. Touch me like you didn't touch me last night.

scud_o wants feedback, then it's feedback he gets.

He's an incredibly good writer, but he's been getting in a bit of a rut lately (sounds like me, truth be told) and so he wanted me to push him. As such, I'm his currently his "WRITE, BITCH, WRITE!" bitch, and I gave him a challenge to shoot for 1000 words, give or take a hundred, in a style he rarely, if ever, works in.

He posted the results at such an odd time that it got swallowed by all the LJ entries I get every day.

To make up for my horrible oversight, here's a link to his little shortfic.

Read it and comment.
If you've got time, rummage through his previous stuff.

He can be damn good, this Son of Ramp.
I still expect great things out of him.

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