Touch me. Touch me like you didn't touch me last night.

More of “Receiver” tonight or tomorrow…

I think it’s turning itself into a play…

Thoughts? I think play is the only option without ruining the rhythm of the characters’ dialogue with shit like “Joe said,” and “Watson ejaculated” and “He said, sipping his cold coffee like it was Louden Wainwright’s bile…”

Oh, and for those who don’t know (new people), you can join www.yahoogroups.com/group/dead-horse to discuss my shit.

I like feedback, positive or negative.

Or just send me feedback directly.

Fuck, I still owe you guys music feedback, don’t I? I’ll scour the archives tonight and report back on everything I could find through…*koff*…legitimate file-sharing…thankfully, only one or two didn’t quite ring my bell…

benjamin sTone
Sorry about the gap in writing, but you know, it happens

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