STORY DONE!!! HULK SMASH!!!
May. 19th, 2005 07:53 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
benchiladaLiving fuck, it's done.
I finished my story.
I haven't even reread it yet, so please excuse any sloppy mistakes you come across.
Hell, it could even suck glass balls for all I know. Don't care right now.
I've changed a number of bits in the beginning and -- *gasp* -- cut a lot of swearing at the start to change the tone.
As such, even if you've read the first part before, please please please give it a reread.
PLEASE give COMMENTS! Please suggest who the living fuck might buy a story like this. Even in comic format.
My tooth is throbbing, I'm freezing cold, my throat is on fire, and my goddamned hands are shaking.
But I'm the happiest fucker in the world right this moment. Sara comes home in thirty minutes. Time to start cooking marinated pork tenderloin in our cast iron skillet and make some seasoned rice in the rice cooker. And drink me some whiskey.
Very first, VERY ROUGH complete draft
It was called "Jimmy the Spook" or "Ghost in the Bottle."
I'll have to separate it into several entries.
"This story is, for now, called Bullet Proof"
EDIT: This version of the story has been removed, and the later revision cut down to excerpts, for potential publication reasons. Sorry, kids.
End Part One
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benjamin sTone
Current Music: the space betwen "Hollow Man 1" and "Hollow Man 2" on Kula Shaker's album K
Last Book I Read a Page of: "Hellblazer: Damnation's Flame" -- Garth Ennis and Steve Dillon
Last Movie: Battles Without Honor and Humanity and I had Hard Boiled going in the background again today
Next Movie: Probably Finding Neverland
Smooches to all, my beauties.
7:49pm, May 19, 2005
Urbana, Illinois
I finished my story.
I haven't even reread it yet, so please excuse any sloppy mistakes you come across.
Hell, it could even suck glass balls for all I know. Don't care right now.
I've changed a number of bits in the beginning and -- *gasp* -- cut a lot of swearing at the start to change the tone.
As such, even if you've read the first part before, please please please give it a reread.
PLEASE give COMMENTS! Please suggest who the living fuck might buy a story like this. Even in comic format.
My tooth is throbbing, I'm freezing cold, my throat is on fire, and my goddamned hands are shaking.
But I'm the happiest fucker in the world right this moment. Sara comes home in thirty minutes. Time to start cooking marinated pork tenderloin in our cast iron skillet and make some seasoned rice in the rice cooker. And drink me some whiskey.
Very first, VERY ROUGH complete draft
It was called "Jimmy the Spook" or "Ghost in the Bottle."
I'll have to separate it into several entries.
"This story is, for now, called Bullet Proof"
EDIT: This version of the story has been removed, and the later revision cut down to excerpts, for potential publication reasons. Sorry, kids.
End Part One
---
benjamin sTone
Current Music: the space betwen "Hollow Man 1" and "Hollow Man 2" on Kula Shaker's album K
Last Book I Read a Page of: "Hellblazer: Damnation's Flame" -- Garth Ennis and Steve Dillon
Last Movie: Battles Without Honor and Humanity and I had Hard Boiled going in the background again today
Next Movie: Probably Finding Neverland
Smooches to all, my beauties.
7:49pm, May 19, 2005
Urbana, Illinois
