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Since I started it when I had about 150 readers and did the last bit with less than 200, now that I have 250+, I figure it's time to revisit my Mo-Lan devils story.

I've done some vague rewrites on Part 3 and serious rewrites on Part 4.

We'll see how they end up sounding when I repost them.

And how Part 5 turns out.

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